THis needs some work. The first thing is presentation. Try and put this through slideshare. It will make it easier to read. The second thing is that you have only looked at one magazine title. You need 3 magazines to give you a reasonable insight into this kind of magazine. Although you have looked at different isues of Kerrang you have still only looked at Kerrang. The next thing is that this need more detail. Why does these colours appeal to the audience? What kind of shot is that phtograph? What words are used to grab that specific audience and why? The more detail the better.
THis needs some work. The first thing is presentation. Try and put this through slideshare. It will make it easier to read.
ReplyDeleteThe second thing is that you have only looked at one magazine title. You need 3 magazines to give you a reasonable insight into this kind of magazine. Although you have looked at different isues of Kerrang you have still only looked at Kerrang.
The next thing is that this need more detail. Why does these colours appeal to the audience? What kind of shot is that phtograph? What words are used to grab that specific audience and why? The more detail the better.