My pitch is very clear and straight to the point, it shows a good target audience and looks professional. The colour scheme works great with the magazine, although make sure the colour of the text is clearer, for example try not to use yellow on white, maybe yellow on black would work better. The flat plans can be a little confusing although it suits the magazine, it looks professional but should be made easier to understand. Great research about how people getting influenced to buy the clothes they see in music magazines. Altogether a few changes are in order but good feedback.
This could be better. A few changes are in order... what are those changes, what will you do to make them, how will you know if they have been successful.
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